Third Revision

Ahem, well, the script just went through a third revision. Here’s the deal: the thing needs so much work. Yikes. But…

I’m going to toss it into the UCLA contest on Monday pretty much as it is right now.

Going through the revision this time through and reviewing notes I have from The Respected Ones helped me to see some BIG things that need to change. There are a lot of bones in place, but this baby needs an overhaul on some major character and situational elements.

Unfortunately, no time before Monday for those things. So, I’ll clean ‘er up and let ‘er fly.


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